Comments on: RAP!?!??!?!!???!?!?!? http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/ Tue, 22 May 2012 14:19:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.7.1 hourly 1 By: KS http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9724 KS Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9724 If u 12 or 14 than ok but if you grown step up game partna If u 12 or 14 than ok but if you grown step up game partna

]]> By: Zachary S http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9725 Zachary S Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9725 im sorrry man not being mean but not a very good rap their is no real point to it sorry im sorrry man not being mean but not a very good rap their is no real point to it sorry

]]> By: Die$ly MF http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9726 Die$ly MF Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9726 kinda terrible i gotta say sorry... the swine flus killed 1 person in america lmfao and ppl can still get a meal in the recession but ppl cant buy there expensive ish.. and the ppl stealin are the ppl addicted to drugs and alcohol. kinda terrible i gotta say sorry… the swine flus killed 1 person in america lmfao and ppl can still get a meal in the recession but ppl cant buy there expensive ish.. and the ppl stealin are the ppl addicted to drugs and alcohol.

]]> By: Aleister http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9727 Aleister Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9727 That is the rawest s*** I have seen here in along time. That is the rawest s*** I have seen here in along time.

]]> By: . http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9728 . Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9728 u suck doesnt matta how old you are. you still suck u suck

doesnt matta how old you are. you still suck

]]> By: KSuds09 http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9729 KSuds09 Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9729 lol nicely done;; recision isnt a word tool lol nicely done;; recision isnt a word tool

]]> By: BugsBunnyGal4eva http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9730 BugsBunnyGal4eva Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9730 This is not the best rap I have ever heard but I think that if you work on it and tweak it, it should be a better rap. This is not the best rap I have ever heard but I think that if you work on it and tweak it, it should be a better rap.

]]> By: Brittany B http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9731 Brittany B Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9731 No I dont like it much, You just need a little practice thats all No I dont like it much, You just need a little practice thats all

]]> By: [[CeCi]]™ http://www.beatswagger.net/rap-15/comment-page-1/#comment-9732 [[CeCi]]™ Thu, 11 Feb 2010 19:14:18 +0000 #comment-9732 yur startin off at a good point. i have a lot of friends who are rappers and they always spit their lyrics to me. all of the people above me just stated it either sucked or it was good. imma do the honor of helping u out. here are some tips on how to make it better: -use bigger words all the words you used are simple language anyone can write that, yu gotta be smart and use yur own type of rap language. -most rappers are better at not making sense. that goes along with using big words. wen rapping yu dont have to stay on subject the whole time. switch things up a bit yur startin off at a good point.
i have a lot of friends who are rappers and they always spit their lyrics to me.
all of the people above me just stated it either sucked or it was good.
imma do the honor of helping u out.

here are some tips on how to make it better:
-use bigger words
all the words you used are simple language
anyone can write that, yu gotta be smart and use yur own type of rap language.

-most rappers are better at not making sense.
that goes along with using big words.
wen rapping yu dont have to stay on subject the whole time.
switch things up a bit

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