RAP!?!??!?!!???!?!?!?
Posted by adminFeb 11
lemme write somethin you’ll feel.
I’ve been lied 2 many times 2,
not keep it real.
now we got the swine flu
they killin a mill.
thats pop dot control
welcome 2 recision, you can’t get a meal
the world so cold, forced 2 rob n steal
i remember, when the game was sold
now it’s told… in every download
hip-hop is dead yo, were’d it go?
I R 13 and made this in the matter of 3 mins. by the way
9 comments
Comment by KS on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
If u 12 or 14 than ok but if you grown step up game partna
Comment by Zachary S on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
im sorrry man not being mean but not a very good rap their is no real point to it sorry
Comment by Die$ly MF on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
kinda terrible i gotta say sorry… the swine flus killed 1 person in america lmfao and ppl can still get a meal in the recession but ppl cant buy there expensive ish.. and the ppl stealin are the ppl addicted to drugs and alcohol.
Comment by Aleister on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
That is the rawest s*** I have seen here in along time.
Comment by . on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
u suck
doesnt matta how old you are. you still suck
Comment by KSuds09 on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
lol nicely done;; recision isnt a word tool
Comment by BugsBunnyGal4eva on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
This is not the best rap I have ever heard but I think that if you work on it and tweak it, it should be a better rap.
Comment by Brittany B on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
No I dont like it much, You just need a little practice thats all
Comment by [[CeCi]]™ on February 11, 2010 at 3:14 pm
yur startin off at a good point.
i have a lot of friends who are rappers and they always spit their lyrics to me.
all of the people above me just stated it either sucked or it was good.
imma do the honor of helping u out.
here are some tips on how to make it better:
-use bigger words
all the words you used are simple language
anyone can write that, yu gotta be smart and use yur own type of rap language.
-most rappers are better at not making sense.
that goes along with using big words.
wen rapping yu dont have to stay on subject the whole time.
switch things up a bit